[Beast Boy]

This was ordinary day for Saturday family,but happen fear moment.
Zak,Zak's mom and his Dad go walk on air ship and fly in point location,where they find new cryptid:omonite.
Bridge air ship:On screen was view doctor Michael.Doc say hem about new cryptid.
Michael,what is new cryptid?
This is omonite cat-very powerful and very danger cryptid,what we find in ice land in Canada.
You seriously?
Of course,be careful.Zak,you best don't go with you parents on hunt on this terrible monster,that is very danger for you,because this cryptid can kill you.You more little kid.
Never don't say me what i little kid,me 12 age ago!
I know,but you don't adult and you can't attack this cryptid even if you have power control on cryptids.
All right,i will be stand here on air ship.
Good.End message!
Doc and Zak's mom go in ice cave.
Be careful!
I know.
Look on this,this cryptid is nasty!
Somebody help us,we under attack very big cryptid.
Zak on air ship hear this message and he and Fisk go in cave safe parents from hand terrible cryptid.
***To be continue...***

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This post has been edited by Beast Boy: 10 February 2012 - 07:50 AM

[Eaglet]

Interesting beginning of the story, i want know that can the cryptid. I think he very strong.

[Beast Boy]

Eaglet,very thanks for answer about my novel.

[TCyredanea]

This is interesting... looks like a script and that's nice. But, what exactly is a cryptid?

[Beast Boy]

TCyredanea, on 19 February 2012 - 02:25 PM, said:

This is interesting... looks like a script and that's nice. But, what exactly is a cryptid?

Good question TC,watching this series on CN and you know what this is cryptid.

[May]

TCyredanea, on 19 February 2012 - 02:25 PM, said:

This is interesting... looks like a script and that's nice. But, what exactly is a cryptid?

Probably something like these:



Cool script...

[Beast Boy]

May,thanks for answer,but i more don't end my novel and i don't know when can end this novel,maybe in april or maybe in june month.