Bruffy-NovaTrek05 : "A Tale Of Two Captains, Pt 1” The Romulans make their move!
Posted 25 January 2012 - 10:53 PM
NovaTrek 5 - A Tale of Two Captains
by MD Bruffy
The crew of the Federal Starship Enterprise returns for their fifth outing, full of Romulan menace, Kirk family tensions and a great cliff-hanger ending! Click on the link to browse or download this pdf from the TrekUnited Issuu website. The first of a three part story arc within Nova Trek: Captain Janet Kirk must make a decision that could affect the fate of not just the Federal Union of Planets but the entire known galaxy! Who should she trust? The Romulan commander who offers to betray the Star Empire in the name of peace or the man from another reality who wears a face from her past. 72p. US Letter.
Click the cover graphic above to browse and download this latest offering on the Issuu webpage. For those of you who came in late, Madison's four other issues are...
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Posted 26 January 2012 - 05:25 AM
I hope everyone will try it and remember to leave a comment or two.
Posted 26 January 2012 - 02:27 PM
Posted 26 January 2012 - 03:19 PM
jespah, I try to keep the format of the books as close to an "episode" as I can. So each one starts with the "Voice Over", There are scene changes- breaks- where you'd almost expect to see commericals, and of course the closing credits.
Beast Boy, if you like ships, then stick around. You'll see more near the end of part2 and ALOT more in part 3.
Posted 27 January 2012 - 03:01 AM
Posted 27 January 2012 - 09:54 AM
I like that approach very much. It really shouldn't be action, action, action all the time. The reader gets exhausted. You do a fine job in building suspense, too.
Posted 27 January 2012 - 05:52 PM
You're right. Even if it were an actual novel, the reader needs points where they can stop and catch their breath once in awhile before things pick up again.
Beast Boy, I think you're missing out on a lot. The 24th century wouldn't exist without the 23rd. But that's your choice.
This post has been edited by mdbruffy: 27 January 2012 - 05:52 PM