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#1 Commander Lazar

 

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Posted 27 May 2011 - 06:44 AM

After the Enterprise-E was destroyed two years later a new Enterprise was built: The Enterprise-F. This is her first mission.
The huge one and a half kilometer ship was in a dry dock, preparing for her maiden voyage. The big gray monster had 3 warp nacelles and 6 impulse engines. But ,,you can't judge a book by it's cover'', the real surprise was in the Enterprise: 500 photon torpedoes, 400 quantum torpedoes, and 20 protomatter torpedoes. Those are only the weapons. The NCC 1701-F has 65 decks, the best engineering in the hole alpha quadrant, 40 new Argo shuttles and the communication system that could hail the Earth from the Delta quadrant.
It was in the new huge Ten-Forward that the new crew celebrated the new ship. There were more then a hundred people in ten forward listening to a toast by Picard:
''This is the third Enterprise that i have been a captain on. We got our dear friend Data back, Dr. Crusher, Wesley, Worf, Geordi, Will, Deana and more others. I have worked 20 years with all of them. And i am happy to be back!''.
A day after the party the crew was on the bridge. Like the first time the Enterprise-B was on her maiden voyage the bridge was full of reporters. Picard couldn't say a word to Riker because of all those reporters that were talking in the same time.
,,Ghay'cha!'' Worf screamed.
,,Get the hell of this bridge or ill set this phaser on Full stun!''
All of the reporters have silently got in to the turbolifts.
,,Thank you Worf'' said Picard.
The silence was stopped by a science officer: ,,Captain, sensors detect a unknown ship warping trough the system''.
End of part 1.
Again if i have some mistakes in the writing just say.

Edited by Commander Lazar, 30 May 2011 - 02:08 PM.


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Posted 30 May 2011 - 01:22 PM

Me like,idea interesting: created story about new "Enterprise".Sorry,but part 1 is very short. I hope,what two part will be large and more interesting,than first.

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Posted 30 May 2011 - 04:54 PM

Part 2:
,,Two same ships decloaking. '' said the science officer.
,,Hail them Mr. Worf!'' said Picard strangely happy.
After some time the Klingon said:
,,No response''.
The three ships in a triangle formation came close to the Earth Orbital Facility. Then they stopped.
,,Captain this appears to be a hybrid between a Romulan and a Cardassian ship. They shared technology.'' said the same science officer.
,,They are powering-up the weapons! '' Worf screamed.
,,Can we use the protomatter torpedo?'' asked Picard.
,,No, we are to close to the dock!'' Worf said.
,,Arm qantum torpedoes and all phasers! '' said the captain ,,Let's see what this girl can do!''
The ships started shooting the Orbital Facility with Cardassian phaser-weapons and Romulan disruptors. The Enterprise-F started shooting all phasers and torpedoes. As soon as the enemy ships could turn bow to the Enterprise they fired a volley of torpedoes.
,,Use the tractor beams to direct the torpedoes to the enemy ships!'' cried Picard.
,,Alright!'' said Data.,,I think it's working captain!''.
The enemy ships didn't have enough time to react and sustained heavy damage. But they are not giving up. A rain of phaser-beams came out of the ships headed to the new Enterprise.
,,Wesley! Evasive action Delta 4 Alpha!'' Picard shouted.
,,Aye sir!'' said the young helmsmen.
The Enterprise was hit by many beams but it missed a great deal because of a good helmsmen.
,,Mr.Crusher get us close to the ship formation but out of the their weapons-range before they power-up for another volley! As soon as were out of their weapons-range four qantum torpedoes for every ship!''the captain spoke.
,,Aye!'' said both Worf and Wesley in the same time.
,,Transporter room 1!'' said Picard.
,,Yes?'' said the officer in the Transporter room.
,,As soon as the enemy ships shields are down get a lock on every bridge officer and transport them into a forcefield area.''
,,O.K!'' said the officer.
The Enterprise fired four qantum torpedoes at all three enemy ships.
,,Captain their shields are down.''
,,Transporter room?'' said Picard
,,I've got em' sir! They bridge crew appears to be made of Cardassians and Romulans!'' said officer Kile.
,,I'll be there immediately! Commander Worf, Will, Tuvok, with me. In the mean time keep all weapons powered-up. And scan for the ion trail that the ships left, they must of came out of somewhere.'' said Picard
End of Part 2.

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Posted 03 June 2011 - 12:46 PM

I need some time to write Part 3!.

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Posted 05 June 2011 - 07:59 AM

Part 3:
In the transporter room on the transporter pads behind a blue force-field stood a group of some Cardassians and Romulans. The captain walked in to the transporter room, Worf, Riker and Tuvok following him.
,,What gives you the right to attack a Federation space-dock?!'' the captain shouted. One of the Cardassinas came forward.
He said ,,We are the ,,Alliance''! That is all i could say.''. Picard stood confused.
,,Why did you attack us?''. The Cardassian stood still. Then a young Romulan came close to him and whispered:
,,I think we should tell them.''. The Cardassian took out a weapon and vaporized the Romulan. Everyone was stunned.
,,Worf disarm all of them! Why the hell did you do that? They need to be escorted to the brig!''.
,,Security team Alpha, to transporter room 1.'' Tuvok said when tapped the communicator.
Captain was standing in his new big ready-room with a cup of Tea in his hand. In came Tuvok.
,,Captain, their not talking. We did not get any information from them.''
,,Damn. Send them to the Earth prison facility. Hail another ship in the system so she can guard the Hybrids. We need to follow the ion trail the ships left. Fortunately with these new ship-sensors we can detect a ion trail of a cloacked ship.'' quietly spoke the captain.
,,Aye sir.''
In engineering Geordi and B'elanna were looking at a computer screen showing a thin blue line that represented the ion trail.
,,Captain it appears that the ion trail leads to the 004 system right in a wormhole. Were sending coordinates.''
,,Thanks Geordi. Warp 10 to those coordinates... Engage!''
Enterprise came close to a vortex of green- blue energy.
,,Send a class 4 probe inside!'' spoke Picard.
,,Aye sir.'' answered Worf.
,,Captain the probe has been destroyed. By class 2 disruptors!''
,,Source?''
,,The other end of the wormhole. And now we are being scanned from the same source!'' said Worf stunned.
,,Maximum shields, take us inside the wormhole mister Crusher. Full impulse!''
The bridge started shaking. Some blue energy beams hit the Enterprise.
,,Return fire! Ten qantum torpedoes.'' Picard shouted.
The source of the energy beams could not be seen yet. It newer stopped shooting. Even after it was hit by ten qantum torpedoes. Finally the enemy could be seen! It was a Cardassian station but more bigger. It was huge! And it didn't stop shooting.
,,Arm protomatter torpedo. Fire when ready!''
A small torpedo came out of one of the normal torpedo tubes. It hit the stations shields.
,,Their shield are down to 32 percent!''
,,How long until we can arm another protomatter torpedo?'' asked the captain.
,,Three minutes!'' answered Worf.
,,Don't stop firing Worf! All phasers and torpedoes!''
The station launched a small red torpedo from its torpedo tube. The torpedo hit the Enterprise.
,,Damage?''
,,Bow shields and torpedo tubes have been destroyed! We can launch the protomatter torpedo only from the aft side of the ship!''
,,Make it so!''
The Enterprise turned 360 degrees so its aft side could be faced to the enemy station. It fired the protomatter torpedo.
,,The enemy station is disabled!''.
End of Part 3.

Edited by Commander Lazar, 12 June 2011 - 10:36 AM.


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Posted 06 June 2011 - 10:25 AM

Commander_Lazar,i think what this story need continue.Me very like. Maybe in next part story will be about return Dominion in alpha quadrant.

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 05:47 AM

Commander_Lazar,i think what this story need continue.Me very like. Maybe in next part story will be about return Dominion in alpha quadrant.

I haven't watched DS9, so i don't know much about the Dominion. But i will continue this story!

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 03:09 PM

,,Hail them!''
,,Aye captain.''
A Cardassian appeared in the screen. Around him dead bodies, wires hanging from the ceiling, broken peaces of metal all around the bridge. The Cardassian said:
,,No! You destroyed our projector! The wormhole is closing!''
,,He's right captain!''spoke one officer,,The wormhole is closed.''
,,Now we can't fix the projector we can't get home! Our station is loosing power! Were dead in the water.''
,,Why did you attack us!?''
,,You found our secret base... In the Omega Qadrant. In the galaxy NGC 6622'' (by the way, that's a real galaxy)
,,To get home it will take us 120 years in maximum transwarp.'' said Wesley Crusher scared.
,,But there is a chance we could fix the device!'' said the Cardassian.
,,How?''
,,The only power source that could be used is the Nanomatter. But to find it will be very hard. The only Nanomatter source is on the far side of a nebula. The nebula is very strange. The last ship we sent there never came back. Sometimes we even deteckt a power source inside it. Flashes of light. We are going to send every ship we can to help you. Were sending the coordinates of the nebula.''
,,Damn!'' Picard shouted.
,,Shut the audio off! Could it be a trap?'' he said to Worf.
,,I don't know. I am scanning the nebula... I am not sure, but there is some kind of sphere inside it.''
,,What kind?'' asked the captain.
,,A Dyson sphere... like the on we encountered at stardate 46125.3. (episode 130 ,,Relics'')''
,,How big?''
,, Two million meters in diameter! No weapon systems that we know of and one tractor beam.''
,,Send a message to the Cardassians that we are going in the nebula in on hour.'' announced Picard.
Everyone on Enterprise preparing to enter the nebula. Geordi in engineering was activating a lair of forcefields to protect the warp core. On the deck which the torpedo tubes are Worf and Tuvok were adjusting the Protomatter torpedo to be more efficient. In sickbay doctor Crusher was preparing for injuries.
A Cardassian ship came out of one of the docking bay. It was a small ,,Galor'' class ship. But with some Romulan details. The two ships headed for the nebula that could even be seen from their location. It was blue-green. A cold light emerging from its center.
,,We are entering the nebula.''
,,Steady as she goes!'' Picard spoke.
,,Captain, the Dyson sphere is within sensor range. It's huge!'' said a young Bajoran women.
,,On screen!''
The sphere was huge. Suddenly a tractor caught the Enterprise. It was moving the Enterprise toward a gate in the sphere.
,,Weapons off-line!'' said Worf
,,Engines off-line!'' added Wesley.
,,Why didn't it tractor the Galor ship?'' Picard asked himself.
Enterprise: it was like a star next to a galaxy. The gate opened then closed after the Enterprise was inside. The tractors disappeared after the Enterprise was in. Inside the sphere were two stars: one supernova one normal. Around them millions of ships. Some small some big.

Edited by Commander Lazar, 13 June 2011 - 07:19 AM.


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Posted 13 June 2011 - 10:29 AM

Ah, it's kind of a Bermuda Triangle in space?
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Posted 13 June 2011 - 11:31 AM

Ah, it's kind of a Bermuda Triangle in space?

Something like that.

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Posted 14 June 2011 - 08:15 AM

Nice to know at least someone is reading this.

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Posted 15 June 2011 - 11:14 AM

Part 5:
,,Can you detect any life-forms in the sphere?'' asked Picard
,,No. All the ships are empty! All their power has been drained.''
,,Who did this to them?''
,,Apparently the ones that created this!'' said Wesley. He pointed to the screen. On it a small sphere ship decloaking.
,,Hail them!''
,,Aye!''
On the screen appeared a head. Or what looked like a head. It was a head of a artificial life-form. Long, gray, with a read glow in it's eyes. It said with a lifeless voice.
,,You are organic life-forms. If you cannot give us the technology we need you are to be terminated.''
After some time Picard answered ,,What kind technology do you want?''
,,We need the technology that can help us slow down or terminate the process of a supernova explosion that is going to occur within this sphere in nine days, four hours, nine minutes and fifty six seconds.''
Picard looked at Worf.
,,If you are planing to escape that will not be possible because of the force-field that is surrounding the gate!'' the android pronounced.
,,Hmmm... I know of a matter that could help you! It's called ,,Red Matter'' and it can turn a supernova star into a harmless black-hole. But to get it you will need to open the gates so we could...'' the android interrupted Picard.
,,We are not programmed to let anyone go!''
Picard took a deep breath and quietly said:
,,Did you capture all these ships?''
,,We thought that the technology from the ship's data banks could help us. But it didn't. The organic life-forms just got in the way so they needed to be terminated.''
,,We will not get in the way. I'm sending our whole data banks to your ship.'' Picard spoke.
,,We will need seven hours to check your data banks.''
The transmission ended. Silence took over the bridge crew. Nobody talked for a few minutes. Then the captain said:
,,I need suggestions of how to destroy that force-field and how to destroy the source of the beam that is jamming the weapons and the engines!''
,,We could take a shuttle and destroy it with mines!'' spoke Riker
,,Too risky! Who know there might be thousands of enemy ships cloaked.''
,,Might i suggest that we decompress the shuttle bay and blow out a shuttle filled with mines and torpedoes so it could hit the force-field and hopefully destroy it.'' said Data.
Captain was thinking for a moment and then pressed his comm badge and said:
,,Geordi, can you find the source of the beam that's jamming us?''
,,I believe i have found it! It's on the the gate trough which we entered!''
,,We'll use Data's plan! Fill the shuttle with two protomatter torpedoes four quantum torpedoes and ten antimatter mines. That should bloody their noses!''
,,Aye sir!'' happily said Will.
In the bay Will and a young Bolian were loading the mines and torpedoes. He pressed the comm badge and said:
,,Two more minutes! We have loaded the mines. We just have to get out of the bay!''
,,Acknowledged Will!'' answered Picard.
Two minutes later the bay doors opened. Behind them a blue force-field. In the control room Will said to the Bolian:
,,Cut power to the force-fields!''
,,Cutting power to the force-fields!''
,,Decompressing the shuttle bay!''
The shuttle was blown out into space. It drifted toward the gate. When the shuttle hit the force-field it exploded. Then a blinding light.
,,Captain! The force-field is destroyed!'' said Geordi
,,Engines coming online now sir!'' spoke Wesley
,,Get us the hell out of here mister Crusher! Are the weapons online Worf?''
,,Yes!''
While the Enterprise was moving toward the exit seven small sphere ships decloaked behind her.
,,Captain they are firing some kind of energy beam!''
,,Photon torpedoes mister Worf!''
,,Aye!''
The Enterprise exited the sphere. But the ships didn't follow.
,,Cowards!'' whispered Worf to himself.

Captains log stardate 63402.1. We have brought back the Nanomatter and are waiting for the wormhole projector to be fixed. The last message we got from the Cardassians was that the repairs are to be finished in four hours. I finally figured out why the Dyson sphere didn't take the Galor. It is because they already had a Galor ship in their ,,collection'' .
Data said to Picard:
,,We got a message from the Cardassians that the repairs are complete but the wormhole will only be able to deposit us in the Delta quadrant.''
,,Why is that?''
,,Because of some malfunctions.''
,,With our transwarp technology we could shortly get home from the Delta quadrant!''
THE END.
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Edited by Commander Lazar, 15 June 2011 - 11:15 AM.


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Posted 20 July 2011 - 05:33 PM

Commander_Lazar,this enterprise-f:

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What do you think about this excelent modern ship?

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Posted 20 July 2011 - 06:09 PM

Commander_Lazar,this enterprise-f:

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What do you think about this excelent modern ship?

Martok thank you very much! It looks great! Did you make this picture?

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Posted 21 July 2011 - 03:42 PM

No,i can not draw in 3D-max,picture i give from official startrek site.

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#16 Commander Lazar

 

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 03:35 PM

No,i can not draw in 3D-max,picture i give from official startrek site.

Thanks anyway!



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