TrekUnited Forum: "Battle" - TrekUnited Forum

Jump to content

             
Page 1 of 1

"Battle" part1.

#1 User is offline   Beast Boy Icon

  • Admiral
  • View gallery
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 1,594
  • Joined: 25-September 09
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Galaxy-alpha quadrant-sector 001-Earth-Russian Federation.

Posted 26 June 2010 - 09:09 AM

Sisco:-We recelve dress code from u.s.s. "Tokio". Ship have damage. Our sensors find five life forms on ship.

Worf:-You know,why life forms?

Sisco:-No.We can make rescue mission, but this very danger, if on ship have cardassian and dominion.

Bashir:-Them need medical help.I go with you.

Sisco:- You right, Bashir.

***door sound***

Sisco:-come in.

came Qurk.

Sisco: What's going on?

Quark:-I want go with you on ship.

Sisco:-No, you can stolen LCARS-panel and other technologies.

Quark:-You say,what i thief.

Sisco:-Yes, because you ferengie.

Quark:Yes, but i never can not stolen federation technology.

Sisco:- Just stay way from me!

Quark:-Yes, ser!

Sisco:-Okey, come with me to transporter room ten.

(end introductory chapter).

This post has been edited by Martok: 27 June 2010 - 05:03 AM

0

#2 User is offline   Beast Boy Icon

  • Admiral
  • View gallery
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 1,594
  • Joined: 25-September 09
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Galaxy-alpha quadrant-sector 001-Earth-Russian Federation.

Posted 27 June 2010 - 04:44 AM

Part2:"Danger on starship".

View ship:

destroy wall, explosion consoles and turbolifts. Metall on wallburn.

Sisco:-come to me.

O'Braine:-What's going on?

Sisco:-look this.

O'Braine:-Strange, this metall part burn.

Sisco:-Than?

O'Braine:-Cardassion repulse rifle.

Sisco:-This very bad.

Worf:-Look dominion soldier.They come to warp drive.

Sisco:-Destroy ship.

Worf:-Currect.

Dax:- We can activated sistem weapons on ship for destroy dominion force.

Sisco:-No, we can will be download important information from main computer core. This information about cardassian planets, where many factory, producing battle ships.

Bashir:-Stop. You seriously want download this information?

Sisco:- You afraid?

Bashir:- Of course.

Sisco:- If attack, we transported on "Defiant".

Bashir:-Yes, sir!.

Sisco:-Attention, dominion force come to us. Phaser rifle on maximum power. Fire!

Worf:-Four dominion soldiers dead.

Sisco:-Excellent. Download information.

Dax:-Information on 100%.

Sisco:-Kira, transported us to "Defiant"

(End part 2.).

This post has been edited by Martok: 27 June 2010 - 04:58 AM

0

#3 User is offline   Kirok Icon

  • Publishing and Media Director, Global Moderator
  • View gallery
  • Group: Global Moderators
  • Posts: 2,258
  • Joined: 23-April 05
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:NSW, Australia
  • Interests:Star Trek, Writing, Science, Philosophy

Posted 29 June 2010 - 07:22 AM

I like the way you've written it like a script - sometimes it makes it easier to see them in your head!

Great work, Martok!

K
Latest releases !!! ~ March 11 - HFO Personal Logs 2 ~ March 19 - PD Smith-Tales From the Fleet 01 : Species 571 ~ March 11 - Bruffy-NovaTrek06 : A Tale Of Two Captains, Pt 2 ~
Kirok of L'Stok - Director of Media ..... "I love deadlines! I love the whooshing sound they make as they fly by!" - Douglas Adams

Posted Image
0

#4 User is offline   Commander Lazar Icon

  • Vice Admiral
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 1,237
  • Joined: 26-March 11
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Europe Serbia
  • Interests:Star trek TNG, TOS, VOY, ENT, TAS, all Star wars movies, Eureka, Battlestar Galactica, Lord of The Rings, writing, Caprica, Family guy, Futurama, The Simpsons, American Dad, Star trek comic books and books, comic books and music.

Posted 07 July 2011 - 06:05 AM

It is interesting.
My Fan Fiction:
http://www.trekunite...showtopic=20989
http://www.trekunite...showtopic=20806
http://www.trekunite...showtopic=20860
http://www.trekunite...showtopic=20930
0

#5 User is offline   Eaglet Icon

  • Crewman 2nd Class
  • View gallery
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 32
  • Joined: 26-January 12
  • Gender:Female
  • Location:Deep and far
  • Interests:Drawing, music, and Star Trek

Posted 15 February 2012 - 10:50 AM

I think what it remarkable story
Nothing is impossible
0

#6 User is offline   Beast Boy Icon

  • Admiral
  • View gallery
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 1,594
  • Joined: 25-September 09
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:Galaxy-alpha quadrant-sector 001-Earth-Russian Federation.

Posted 15 February 2012 - 02:45 PM

Eaglet,very big thanks,but this my early fan fiction,writed in 2010 year.I very glad what you like my fan fiction.
0

Share this topic:


Page 1 of 1

Fast Reply

  

1 User(s) are reading this topic
0 members, 1 guests, 0 anonymous users


This website is not endorsed, sponsored or affiliated with CBS Studios Inc. or the "Star Trek" franchise. The STAR TREK trademarks and logos are owned by CBS Studios Inc. Trekunited.com is owned and operated by The Federation (formerly known as The International Federation of Trekkers).
- Forum designed and built by Thomas Moore -