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#1 Beast Boy


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Posted 26 June 2010 - 09:09 AM

Sisco:-We recelve dress code from u.s.s. "Tokio". Ship have damage. Our sensors find five life forms on ship.

Worf:-You know,why life forms?

Sisco:-No.We can make rescue mission, but this very danger, if on ship have cardassian and dominion.

Bashir:-Them need medical help.I go with you.

Sisco:- You right, Bashir.

***door sound***

Sisco:-come in.

came Qurk.

Sisco: What's going on?

Quark:-I want go with you on ship.

Sisco:-No, you can stolen LCARS-panel and other technologies.

Quark:-You say,what i thief.

Sisco:-Yes, because you ferengie.

Quark:Yes, but i never can not stolen federation technology.

Sisco:- Just stay way from me!

Quark:-Yes, ser!

Sisco:-Okey, come with me to transporter room ten.

(end introductory chapter).

Edited by Martok, 27 June 2010 - 05:03 AM.



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#2 Beast Boy


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Posted 27 June 2010 - 04:44 AM

Part2:"Danger on starship".

View ship:

destroy wall, explosion consoles and turbolifts. Metall on wallburn.

Sisco:-come to me.

O'Braine:-What's going on?

Sisco:-look this.

O'Braine:-Strange, this metall part burn.


O'Braine:-Cardassion repulse rifle.

Sisco:-This very bad.

Worf:-Look dominion soldier.They come to warp drive.

Sisco:-Destroy ship.


Dax:- We can activated sistem weapons on ship for destroy dominion force.

Sisco:-No, we can will be download important information from main computer core. This information about cardassian planets, where many factory, producing battle ships.

Bashir:-Stop. You seriously want download this information?

Sisco:- You afraid?

Bashir:- Of course.

Sisco:- If attack, we transported on "Defiant".

Bashir:-Yes, sir!.

Sisco:-Attention, dominion force come to us. Phaser rifle on maximum power. Fire!

Worf:-Four dominion soldiers dead.

Sisco:-Excellent. Download information.

Dax:-Information on 100%.

Sisco:-Kira, transported us to "Defiant"

(End part 2.).

Edited by Martok, 27 June 2010 - 04:58 AM.



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Posted 29 June 2010 - 07:22 AM

I like the way you've written it like a script - sometimes it makes it easier to see them in your head!

Great work, Martok!


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Posted 07 July 2011 - 06:05 AM

It is interesting.

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Posted 15 February 2012 - 10:50 AM

I think what it remarkable story
Nothing is impossible

#6 Beast Boy


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Posted 15 February 2012 - 02:45 PM

Eaglet,very big thanks,but this my early fan fiction,writed in 2010 year.I very glad what you like my fan fiction.



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